Feedback from Test Screening

Mise en scene - Include a good choice of costume, however less predictable locations would have been a better idea. The alarm was a good prop and also using the mobile phone to contrast the two classes.

Camerawork: There are slow camera movements, however there is a good variety of camera shots.

Editing: the pace of the clips has a good flow that helps to give the viewer a sense of time between the two characters. Need to make the titles a bit smaller and could add some more movement to them such as sliding in. Also, need to make sure titles don't overlap into footage.

Sound: A bit too upbeat.

Generic Conventions: The locations have been picked well for the social realism convention.

Given Level: Level 3, mark between 40-60. Proficient.