Plan of changes after recieving feedback.

Mise-en-scene:
The main comment for mise-en-scene was that the location was a bit too predictable. However unfortunately we are limited to the location we have chosen and also are under time pressure so we cannot make these changes.

Camerawork:
Camera movements too slow, shots held on too long. We have cut them down already, we need to keep them the same so the character footage length is in propourtion. It reflects the characters way of life - higher class, fast paced. Lower class, slower paced.

Editing:
We were asked to make titles smaller and make them more animated, such as moving text. we are going to make the titles smaller but we are not adding effects to the titles as this would make it less naturalistic and would not suit the genre of british social realism.

Sound:
Our sound was said to be too upbeat, we think the suits the routine of the people as one is a up-beat life and the other is rushing which is also up-beat. We based the soundtrack on 'This is england' which also has an up-beat reggae based soundtrack.

Generic Conventions:
There were no comments on improvements for the generic conventions.